邮件一:
Dear Mr.Wang Xiao Er,
Thank you for your inquiry of 6 MAY. We are pleasure that you are interested in our products XXXXX and XXXX.
We've sent the products'photo in the attachment and detailed information of the product below:
For the payment: T/T; Western Union; PayPal.
For the Shipment : DHL, TNT, UPS,FEDEX.
We look forward to receive your reply.
Sincerely,
Mr.Xiao Er Wang
邮件二:
Dear Mr. Wang Xiao Er:
Thanks for your email.
For the Product XXXX , each one is $333. It’s really a good price after discount.
Please let me know your decision.
Your Friend,
Mr.Xiao Er Wang
邮件三:
Dear Mr. Wang Xiao Er:
Good Morning, It’s nice to hearing from you.
For the products catalogue and detailplease kindly checking the attachment with the email.
If you still have any question please let me know, after you can sure the quantity I will supply a good price support your business.
Mr.Xiao Er Wang
神转折:
Dear Mr. Wang Xiao Er:
Sorry, I missing the attachment in the last email. Please check.
Your Friend,
Mr.Xiao Er Wang
邮件四:
Dear Mr. Wang Xiao Er:
We surely happy that we can starting the cooperation in the end of the 2014.
As the products you asking is not suitable in your market. In your country XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX.
In the other hand, we have write the two products details below, the left is the products you asking, the right is we suggest, please kindly compare it. We hope can find a best choice and working together:
Waiting for your mail.
Sincerely,
Mr.Xiao Er Wang
邮件五:
Dear Mr. Wang Xiao Er:
Each one $12.33, please trust it’s the high quality and good price. We have many years experiences.
If everything is OK, we will send the Invoice to you.
Sincerely,
Mr.Xiao Er Wang
邮件六:
Dear Mr. Wang Xiao Er:
Please Kindly checking the Invoice in the attachment.
After you transfer the payment already , please send the bank slip back.
Good day,
Mr.Xiao Er Wang
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这些邮件都是我看过很多业务的邮件后DIY出来的。我们来看看,如果我是老外我会怎么来分析,电脑另一端和我写信的业务员是什么样的人吧。